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You are english teacher. You have many students. You would like they get high band in IELTS. But they have a problem with their pronounciation. write a letter to professions in Foreign Languages institute asking for advice improving pronounciation.

You are english teacher. You have many students. You would like they get high band in IELTS. But they have a problem with their pronounciation. write a letter to professions in Foreign Languages institute asking for advice improving pronounciation. mWwRN
Dear Sir/Madam, i would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about improving my students english skills. I have been working at school for a long time so I teach English language for pupils. I feel I have enough practice in English and I would like my pupilss to get high band in IELTS. In addition to this they participate in speaking club which situated in school. But I have any problem with their pronounciations and I hope you can give me a number of advice. what do you suggest? what do you thing I should do? If you were me, what would you do? Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. I understand That you are a busy person and any advice you offerwould be greatly appreciated. If it is helpful, I would be more than happy to discuss my questions over the phone or cafe. I would appreciated it if you could giveme your advice as soon as possible. Your faithfully Jennifer Lopez
Dear Sir/Madam,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would appreciate it if you could give me
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some
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advice
about improving my students
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english
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skills
. I have been working at school for a long time
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so
I teach English language for pupils. I feel I have
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enough
practice in English and I would like my
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pupilss
to
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get
high band in IELTS.
In addition
to this they participate in speaking club which situated in school.
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But
I have any problem with their
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pronounciations
and I hope you can give me a number of
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advice
.
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what
do you suggest?
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what
do you
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thing
I should do? If you were me, what would you do? Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. I understand That you are a busy person and any
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advice
you
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offerwould
be
greatly
appreciated. If it is helpful, I would be more than happy to discuss my questions over the phone or
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cafe
. I would
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "appreciate"
appreciated
it if you could
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giveme
your
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advice
as
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soon
as possible. Your
faithfully
Jennifer
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Lopez
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IELTS letter You are english teacher. You have many students. You would like they get high band in IELTS. But they have a problem with their pronounciation. write a letter to professions in Foreign Languages institute asking for advice improving pronounciation.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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