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Give information about to your friend who wants to visit your country

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DEAR GEORGINA, I HOPE YOU AND YOUR FAMILY ARE WELL. IT WAS SO AMAZING TO SPEND TIME WITH YOU LAST MONTH. I DEEPLY MISS YOU AND I AM WAITING YOU IN THESE DAYS. YOU ARE MY SOUL, YOU HAVE BEEN ALWAYS DEAR FRIEND OF MINE, AND ALWAYS WILL BE. ANYWAY, THE REASON I AM WRITING THAT LAST TWO WEEKS AGO YOU WROTE THAT YOU WANT TO SPEND YOUR HOLIDAY IN MY COUNTRY AND ASKED IN WHICH HOTEL YOU CAN LIVE, WHAT CLOTHES YOU SHOULD BRING WITH YOU. MOREOVER, WHEN I KNEW ABOUT YOUR VISIT I WAS TOO EXCITED WITH THIS NEWS. IT MIGHT BE HELPFUL TO YOU LIVE WITH ME NOT IN A LOUNGE. I DO NOT REALLY SUGGEST YOU ANY INNS FROM MY COUNTRY BECAUSE OF SOME SOME REASONS. FIRSTLY, HOTELS IN OUR COUNTRY PRICES ARE VERY HIGH AND NOT VERY GOOD. FOR INSTANCE, TWO MONTHS AGO MY BROTHER AND HIS FRIENDS LIVED IN A LOUNGE NAMED HILTON. THE HOTEL WAS VERY TINY AND SERVANTS WERE VERY DISCOURTEOUS. HOWEVER, MY BROTHER EVERY YEAR INVITED THIS INN BUT THIS YEAR HIS FRIENDS ALSO COME TO SPEND THEIR VACATION HERE WITH MY BROTHER AND WITHOUT ANY DOUBT HE SUGGESTED TO HIS FRIENDS LIVE IN THIS HOTEL WITH HIM BUT AT THE END MY BROTER WAS NO QUITE WITH INN AND ANNOYED. SO IN THAT CASE YOU WILL LIVE WITH ME AND WE WILL SPEND OUR TIME TOGETHER. ON THE OTHER HAND, YOU WILL NOT SPEND YOUR MONEY YOU WILL LEAVE FOR FREE ON TOP OF THAT, YOU WILL EAT ONLY HEALTY FOODS YOU KNOW THAT, I HAVE A PARTICULAR COOKING FOR FOODS. IF YOU CAN BRING YOUR LITTLE BROTHER IT WILL BE EXCELLENT, BECAUSE YOUR BROTHER AND MY LITTLE SISTWR WILL PLAY UP TOGETHER. I ALSO SUGGEST YOU TO BRING SUMMER CLOTHES SO IN MY COUNTY THE WEATHER IS MODERATE NOT HOT AND NOT BAD. I HOPE THIS INFORMATION WILL BE USEFUL FOR YOU AND I WILL WAIT YOUR ANSWER. KIND REGARDS, LUCY
DEAR GEORGINA,

I HOPE YOU AND YOUR FAMILY ARE WELL. IT WAS
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AMAZING TO
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TIME WITH YOU LAST MONTH. I
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DEEPLY MISS
YOU AND I AM WAITING YOU IN THESE DAYS. YOU ARE MY SOUL, YOU HAVE BEEN ALWAYS DEAR
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FRIEND
OF MINE, AND ALWAYS WILL BE.

ANYWAY, THE REASON I AM WRITING THAT LAST TWO WEEKS AGO YOU WROTE THAT YOU WANT TO
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SPEND
YOUR HOLIDAY IN MY COUNTRY AND ASKED IN WHICH
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HOTEL
YOU CAN
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LIVE
, WHAT CLOTHES YOU SHOULD BRING WITH YOU.
MOREOVER
, WHEN I KNEW ABOUT YOUR VISIT I WAS TOO EXCITED WITH THIS NEWS. IT MIGHT BE HELPFUL TO YOU
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LIVE
WITH ME NOT IN A LOUNGE. I DO NOT
REALLY
SUGGEST YOU ANY INNS FROM MY COUNTRY
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BECAUSE
OF
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REASONS.

FIRSTLY
,
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HOTELS
IN OUR COUNTRY PRICES ARE
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HIGH AND NOT
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.
FOR INSTANCE
, TWO MONTHS AGO MY
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BROTHER
AND HIS
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FRIENDS
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LIVED
IN A LOUNGE NAMED HILTON. THE
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WAS
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TINY AND SERVANTS WERE
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DISCOURTEOUS.
HOWEVER
, MY
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EVERY YEAR INVITED THIS INN
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THIS YEAR HIS
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FRIENDS
ALSO
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TO
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THEIR VACATION HERE WITH MY
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AND WITHOUT ANY DOUBT HE SUGGESTED TO HIS
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LIVE
IN THIS
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WITH HIM
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AT THE
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MY
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BROTER
WAS NO QUITE WITH INN AND ANNOYED.
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IN THAT CASE
YOU WILL
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LIVE
WITH ME AND WE WILL
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OUR TIME TOGETHER.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, YOU WILL NOT
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YOUR MONEY YOU WILL
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FOR FREE
ON TOP OF THAT
, YOU WILL EAT
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HEALTY
FOODS YOU KNOW THAT, I HAVE A PARTICULAR COOKING FOR FOODS. IF YOU CAN BRING YOUR
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LITTLE
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IT WILL BE EXCELLENT,
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YOUR
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AND MY
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SISTWR
WILL PLAY UP TOGETHER. I
ALSO
SUGGEST YOU TO BRING SUMMER CLOTHES
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IN MY COUNTY THE WEATHER IS MODERATE NOT HOT AND NOT
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BAD
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I HOPE THIS INFORMATION WILL BE USEFUL FOR YOU AND I WILL WAIT YOUR ANSWER.

KIND REGARDS,

LUCY
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IELTS letter Give information about to your friend who wants to visit your country

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8 paragraphs
331 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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