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You are current student of Loren Brusque University, studying business administration

You are current student of Loren Brusque University, studying business administration 7W3RX
I am Neeraj. I am writing this letter to show my interest regarding the post of quality assurance manager. I am a student of business administration at Loren Brusque University and I have work experience of 2 years. . so I want to apply for this post. I have passed my graduation in Business and Account and now I am pursuing Business Administration. I have worked in a reputed company as an accountant for 2 years. I have spirit of dedication as well as good communication skills. During my previous job, I was always a punctual employee. Since, I believe in team work as well as I possess all the requirements needed for this job, I find myself suitable for this work. I hope your will consider my letter and provide me opportunity to be a part of your institution. I am waiting for a favourable response from your side. Yours Sincerely, Neeraj
I am
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Neeraj
. I am writing this letter to
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my interest regarding the post of quality assurance manager.
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I
am a student of business administration at Loren Brusque University and I have work experience of 2 years.
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so
I want to apply for this post.

I have passed my graduation in Business and Account and
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now
I am pursuing Business Administration. I have worked in a reputed
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company
as an accountant for 2 years.

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I
have spirit of dedication
as well
as
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good
communication
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skills
. During my previous job, I was always a punctual employee. Since, I believe in team work
as well
as I possess all the requirements needed for this job, I find myself suitable for this work.

I hope your will consider my letter and provide me opportunity to be a part of your institution.

I am waiting for a
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favourable
response from your side.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Neeraj
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IELTS letter You are current student of Loren Brusque University, studying business administration

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7 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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