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Letter to the manager to change the joining date

Letter to the manager to change the joining date VEPwJ

Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to changing my joining date. I was selected for the post of software engineer and was asked to join on 18 February 2021 as per my offer letter. I would like to delay my posting for 15 days as my mother is not well. My mother is a critically unwell and undergoing treatment for cancer. She is hospitalised and would require a 24*7 assistance and support for now. My elder brother is living abroad and She doesn’t have anyone else to take care of her. It is a major necessity to be by her side. I would request you to please delay my joining date for 15 days or provide me part time work from home so that I can handle both the responsibility. I can be reachable at 73839399 for any further discussion. Yours Faithfully Shikha

Dear Sir,

I am writing in regard to changing my joining date. I was selected
 for the post of software engineer and was asked
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 on 18 February 2021 as per my offer letter. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to delay my posting for 15 days as my mother is not well.

My mother is a critically
 unwell and undergoing treatment for cancer. She is Possible spelling mistake. 'hospitalised' is British English.hospitalized
hospitalised
 and would require a Replace by the typographical symbol.24×724·7
24*7
 assistance and support for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. My elder brother is living Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).abroad, and
abroad and
 She doesn’t have anyone else to take care of her. It is a major necessity to be by her side.

I would request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 delay my joining date for 15 days or provide me This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 work from home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can handle both the responsibility. I can be reachable at 73839399 for any further
 discussion.

Yours Faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.Shikhar
Shikha