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Amazing journey of my interview

Amazing journey of my interview K0lOR
During the interview I estimated fifteen days as the amount of time needed for me to finish my activities at my current job and start at your company, but due to fact that I got sick for the last whole week and was not able to work, I could not finish my tasks and will need another week to do so. If necessary, I can give you a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to stay at home and under medical care during that week. To clear the backlog created by my late start, I can work two additional hours every day until I catch up, either coming in early or leaving late. I feel responsible for the pressure my delayed start may have created on the company, and I am going to work harder until everything is back to normal. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and hope this will not affect our relationship. If I am expected to present any other form of proof or talk to someone else in the company, please let me know. Faithfully yours, Leonardo
During the interview I estimated fifteen days as the amount of time needed for me to finish my activities at my
current
job and
start
at your
company
,
but
due to fact that I
got
sick for the last whole week and was not able to work, I could not finish my tasks and will need another week to do
so
. If necessary, I can give you a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to stay at home and under medical care during that week.

To
clear
the backlog created by my late
start
, I can work two additional hours every day until I catch up, either coming in early or leaving late. I feel responsible for the pressure my delayed
start
may have created on the
company
, and I am going to work harder until everything is back to normal.

I
sincerely
apologize for the inconvenience and hope this will not affect our relationship. If I am
expected
to present any other form of proof or talk to someone else in the
company
,
please
let
me know.

Faithfully
yours,

Leonardo
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IELTS letter Amazing journey of my interview

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5 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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