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Apology for I have just missed a friend's party

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Dear John, I am writing this letter to apologise for I missed your party which sorted for your birthday. I am genuinely remorseful what I had done. I travelled with my family last weekends. Unfortunately, I remembered too late about your party. Also, I have already bought tickets for plane. So I did not go party. But I wanted to see your happy day. I hope I will visit next your birthday. However, I got you a present where I travelled. I do not think you are upset with me. Certainly, I am going to visit yours these days if you want. I would be grateful if you reply to write my letter. I am sorry again. Yours sincerely, yours friend James Bond.
Dear John, I am writing this letter to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for I missed your party which sorted for your birthday. I am
genuinely
remorseful what I had done. I travelled with my family last weekends. Unfortunately, I remembered too late about your party.
Also
, I have already
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bought
tickets for
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plane
.
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So
I did not go party.
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But
I wanted to
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see
your happy day. I hope I will visit
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "your birthday" or "next birthday"?
next your birthday
.
However
, I
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got
you a present where I travelled. I do not
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think
you
are upset
with me.
Certainly
, I am going to visit
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yours
these days if you want. I would be grateful if you reply to write my letter. I am sorry again.
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Yours
sincerely
,
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yours
friend James Bond.
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IELTS letter Apology for I have just missed a friend's party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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