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You have arranged to meet a friend next week but you realised you will not be able to meet.Write an apology letter to your friend

You have arranged to meet a friend next week but you realised you will not be able to meet. Write an apology letter to your friend NVj8m
Dear Nancy, Thank you very much for accepting my suggestion to meet me the following week, on Friday. Unfortunately, I regret to inform you of not meeting next week, on Friday. The only reason why I could not make is that a few days ago, I applied for a job as an accountant to a bank and the head director of the company called me for an interview. You know I have just graduated and I have always dreamed about this occupation since I was studying at university, therefore, I have to ask my forgiveness of not being able to see you. What makes me feel uneasier is that firstly I propose the opinion by myself. Would you mind changing the meeting another convenient time for you? If you are agree with me, I would invite you to my home after the interview on Saturday evening. I do hope we will have a good time with you. Best regards, Sara
Dear Nancy,

Thank you
very
much for accepting my suggestion to
meet
me the following week, on Friday.

Unfortunately, I regret to inform you of not meeting
next
week, on Friday. The
only
reason why I could not
make
is that a few days ago, I applied for a job as an accountant to a bank and the head director of the
company
called me for an interview. You know I have
just
graduated and I have always dreamed about this occupation since I was studying at university,
therefore
, I
have to
ask my forgiveness of not being able to
see
you. What
makes
me feel uneasier is that
firstly
I propose the opinion by myself. Would you mind changing the meeting another convenient time for you? If you are
agree
with me, I would invite you to my home after the interview on Saturday evening. I do hope we will have a
good
time with you.

Best regards, Sara
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IELTS letter You have arranged to meet a friend next week but you realised you will not be able to meet. Write an apology letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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