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You want to improve your english skills and find online english group.Write a letter to the teacher of online group.In your letter.

You want to improve your english skills and find online english group. Write a letter to the teacher of online group. In your letter. DNGO6
Dear Sir I am writing to inquire about the CEFR english online group. I am an english teacher Nowadays I am not working because of my health. However, I am going to work next knowledge year at school. I thought I should improve my english skills. So search internet and found your group and I would like to request information about it. Firstly, I wonder you could give me small overview of lessons. It would be interesting to know about your club. Secondly, I would be interested to know how many hours and skills do you teach? So last question is how much does it cost? Your faithfully
Dear Sir

I am writing to inquire about the CEFR
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online group. I am an
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english
teacher Nowadays I am not working
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of my health.
However
, I am going to work
next
knowledge year at school. I
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thought
I should
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improve
my
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english
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skills
.
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So
search internet and found your group and I would like to request information about it.
Firstly
, I wonder you could give me
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small
overview of lessons. It would be interesting to know about your club.

Secondly
, I would
be interested
to know how
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many
hours and
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skills
do you teach?
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So
last question is how much does it cost?

Your
faithfully
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IELTS letter You want to improve your english skills and find online english group. Write a letter to the teacher of online group. In your letter.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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