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ou want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you

ou want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you oVdjw
Dear John, I am writing this letter to let you know about my need to stay in an accommodation for the purpose of study in the same university. Hope you are doing fine. I am planning for a two year Master's Degree in Waste Water from the university where you are currently studying. In addition to it, I will be further pursuing my Chartered accreditation from the same institution. Furthermore, I am looking for shared type room which is very close to the university. Moreover, it is preffered to have internet and geyser facility as well. Also, a mess within the premises would be an added advantage. In addition to the above, I request you to search for a room matching to my requirements which I have stated above. Additionally, you may please cascade this information to your friends as well. Can you also look for an accommodation outside the university after the college hours and pass on the details to me so that, I can get in touch with them. Bye for now. Warm Regards, Tim Salt
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to
let
you know about my need to stay in
an accommodation
for the purpose of study in the same university.

Hope you are doing fine. I am planning for a
two year
Master's Degree in Waste Water from the university where you are
currently
studying.
In addition
to it, I will be
further
pursuing my Chartered accreditation from the same institution.

Furthermore
, I am looking for shared type room which is
very
close to the university.
Moreover
, it is
preffered
to have internet and geyser facility
as well
.
Also
, a mess within the premises would be an
added
advantage.

In addition
to the above, I request you to search for a room matching to my requirements which I have stated above.
Additionally
, you may
please
cascade this information to your friends
as well
. Can you
also
look for
an accommodation
outside the university after the college hours and pass on the
details
to me
so
that, I can
get
in touch with them.

Bye for
now
.

Warm Regards,

Tim Salt
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IELTS letter ou want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details about your study plans What type of accommodation are you looking for Suggest how your friend can search a place for you

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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