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You are coming home late night and detained by police Department for a routine check(patrol). The officer on duty behaved with you rudely. Escalte the complaint to police Commissioner about this incident. In your letter Introduce yourself describe what happened say what you want police Commissinoer to do for you.

You are coming home late night and detained by police Department for a routine check(patrol). The officer on duty behaved with you rudely. Escalte the complaint to police Commissioner about this incident. In your letter Introduce yourself describe what happened say what you want police Commissinoer to do for you. YLkkm
Dear Police Commissioner, I am writing this letter to express a bitter experience of police misconduct that I suffered yesterday. My name is Peter and i live at 9 Oland Crescent, Halifax NS B4S 1C8. Last night, I was coming home after attending a late night party, and at Palace street corner, I was warned to stop the car. Immediately, I pulled over the car and cooperated with the officer. The officer demanded my license and vehicle registration. I complied with his demand. Thereafter, I was asked to step out of my car for interrogation at which I was totally surprised. The officer came close to me and said, "you are drunk, buddy". As I was not sloshed, I challenged his judgement. Without a breathalyser, he decided to confirm it by smelling my mouth. This was disgusting and against the law. The officer's name was Philip and his white Dodge car's registration plate reads 'AYAZ113'. This is a sheer misconduct and this officer must be penalized for his acts. I request you to take appropriate action against him. I hope to hear from you on this matter and my email address is Peter. mac@abc. com Sincerely yours, Peter
Dear Police Commissioner,

I am writing this letter to express a bitter experience of police misconduct that I suffered yesterday.

My name is Peter and
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live
at 9
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Oland
Crescent, Halifax NS B4S 1C8. Last night, I was coming home after attending a late night party, and at Palace street corner, I
was warned
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
the car. Immediately, I pulled over the car and cooperated with the
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officer
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
officer
demanded my license and vehicle registration. I complied with his demand. Thereafter, I
was asked
to step out of my car for interrogation at which I was
totally
surprised. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
officer
came close to me and said,
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"
you
are drunk
, buddy
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"
. As I was not sloshed, I challenged his judgement. Without a
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breathalyser
, he decided to confirm it by smelling my mouth. This was disgusting and against the law. The officer's name was Philip and his white Dodge car's registration plate reads 'AYAZ113'.

This is a sheer misconduct and this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
officer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be penalized
for his acts. I request you to take appropriate action against him.

I hope to hear from you on this matter and my email address is Peter.
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mac@abc
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com


Sincerely
yours,

Peter
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IELTS letter You are coming home late night and detained by police Department for a routine check(patrol). The officer on duty behaved with you rudely. Escalte the complaint to police Commissioner about this incident. In your letter Introduce yourself describe what happened say what you want police Commissinoer to do for you.

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