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Write a letter to apply for position of dealing with clients in English-speaking countries

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Thuong Xuan town, Thanh Hoa province. August, 9th, 2019 Dear Mrs Lee I am a recent graduate from Buckingham University. I am writing this letter to apply for the position of dealing with clients in English-speaking countries. I was referred to you by the website of your international company. I strongly want to get this position because of these following reasons. In the first place, I can improve my English skills through communicating by speaking English everyday. In addition, I can enhance ability to solve problems through working and exchange information with many types of customers each day. More importantly, I believe that this job gives me lessons which help me to complete myself. My teacher said to me that: “Each person is a book if we know how to read them” so taking over this job brings me many opportunities to learn useful things. Though I have just finish my collage, I have experience in communicating with English-speaking people through working at a restaurant in England. I understand what they ỏder and their feedback about quality of food and drink and attitude of employees. I believe that I am fit best this position and I would like to contribute my knowledge and experience to development of company to be worthy of the high salary I get. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Applicant: Hoang Thao Nhi
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Thuong
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August, 9th, 2019

Dear Mrs Lee

I am a recent graduate from Buckingham University. I am writing this letter to apply for the position of dealing with clients in English-speaking countries. I
was referred
to you by the website of your international
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company
.

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I
strongly
want to
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get
this position
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because
of these following reasons. In the
first
place, I can
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improve
my English
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skills
through communicating by speaking English
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everyday
.
In addition
, I can enhance ability to solve problems through working and exchange information with
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many
types of customers each day. More
importantly
, I believe that this job gives me lessons which
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help
me to complete myself. My teacher said to me that: “Each person is a book if we know how to read them”
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so
taking over this job brings me
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many
opportunities to learn useful things.

Though I have
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just
finish my collage, I have experience in communicating with English-speaking
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people
through working at a restaurant in England. I understand what they
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ỏder
and their feedback about quality of food and drink and attitude of employees. I believe that I
am fit
best this position and I would like to contribute my knowledge and experience to development of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to be worthy of the high salary I
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get
. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Applicant:
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Hoang
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Thao
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Nhi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to apply for position of dealing with clients in English-speaking countries

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
235 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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