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Write to your friend telling him to take care of your home while you are away You should state • How long you would be away • Contact to reach you • What you want him to do.

Write to your friend telling him to take care of your home while you are away You should state • How long you would be away • Contact to reach you • What you want him to do. 15bbM
Dear Derey, I hope you are doing well. I write to inform you that I would be out of town for about four weeks to see my parents in the countryside and i want you to help take care of my house while I am away. I have dropped the keys with my next door neighbour. In case you need to contact me, my phone lines will be unreachable; nevertheless, you can reach me on my mother’s telephone number- 0803837368. There are a few things that need to be taken care of but the most important chores which I would love you to personally handle for me would be firstly, to help feed Cherry (my dog) twice daily. I have kept his meals at the cupboard close to the kitchen entrance. You can also bathe him once a week. In addition, kindly water my garden every other day. You will gain access to the garden through the small gate just opposite the kitchen door at the backyard. The watering tools are right in front of the entrance of the garden. I sincerely hope this is not too much of me to ask. I appreciate you my dear friend. Hope to see you real soon. Yours sincerely, Jovids
Dear
Derey
,

I hope you are doing well. I write to inform you that I would be out of town for about four weeks to
see
my parents in the countryside and
i
want you to
help
take care of my
house
while I am away.

I
have dropped the keys with my
next
door
neighbour
. In case you need to contact me, my phone lines will be unreachable;
nevertheless
, you can reach me on my mother’s telephone number- 0803837368.

There are a few things that need to
be taken
care of
but
the most
important
chores which I would
love
you to
personally
handle for me would be
firstly
, to
help
feed Cherry (my dog) twice daily. I have
kept
his meals at the cupboard close to the kitchen entrance. You can
also
bathe him once a week.
In addition
, kindly water my garden every other day. You will gain access to the garden through the
small
gate
just
opposite the kitchen door at the backyard. The watering tools are right in front of the entrance of the garden.

I
sincerely
hope this is not too much of me to ask. I appreciate you my dear friend. Hope to
see
you real
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jovids
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IELTS letter Write to your friend telling him to take care of your home while you are away You should state • How long you would be away • Contact to reach you • What you want him to do.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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