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Write a letter to your landlord to fix the issues in your house

Write a letter to your landlord to fix the issues in your house m1851

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding issues in our house that need to be resolved. Starting our move in date we have experienced many problems. The shower in the bathroom is constantly leaking. Unfortunately, it is hard to sleep at night and impossible to have a bath. Another concern that I would like to bring to your attention is the broken fence. We live on the busy street, people pass our house on a regular basis. I would like to feel safe at my own house, especially consedering that we have paid the full rent and deposit on time. As per our agreement, four tenants suppose to occupy the entire house and currently there are only three of us. As I am a full time student it is extremely hard to afford the rent. If you can not fulfill this request, at least allow us to post an advertisement online and find a roommate. Please, help us to schedule a maintenance person to come. As well as your decision or progress on searching a new tenant. Sincerely, Jane Atkinson

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding issues in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 that need to be resolved
.

Starting our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in date we have experienced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems. The shower in the bathroom is constantly
 leaking. Unfortunately, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to sleep at night and impossible to have a bath. Another concern that I would like to bring to your attention is the broken fence. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 on the busy street, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 pass our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 on a regular basis. I would like to feel safe at my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
, especially
Possible spelling mistake found.considering
consedering
 that we have paid the full rent and deposit on time.

As per our agreement, four tenants suppose to occupy the entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 and currently
 there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 three of us. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I am a full time student it is extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to afford the rent. If you can not fulfill this request, at least This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 us to post an advertisement online and find a roommate.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us to schedule a maintenance person to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. As well
 as your decision or progress on searching a new tenant.

Sincerely
,

Jane Atkinson