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You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park.Write a letter to the head of the city park department .In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do.

You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park. Write a letter to the head of the city park department. In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do. Kx6R

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the enormous dirt at our local park, which has been of great concern to me. Consequently, users are seen littering the dirt all over the park and the bins overflown with dirt, thereby messing up the park’s surroundings. This is an issue to me because it has an adverse effect on the local park’s ambience. I find it difficult to bring my friends from neighbouring communities to the park for relaxation. Furthermore, the dirt can lead to land pollution which can cause blockage on our drainage systems, and air pollution which is not healthy for humans. To resolve this issue, I will suggest that a strict rule be created to prevent the park users from littering the local park. Additionally, I will advise that an environmental clean-up be put in place and bins emptied as soon as they are filled up to avoid the overflow of dirt. This will aid in environmental cleanliness. I hope this can be addressed. Yours faithfully, Sarah Adams

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dirt
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 for relaxation. Furthermore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexcrementsoilmuckmudstainground
dirt
 can lead to land pollution which can cause blockage on our drainage systems, and air pollution which is not healthy for humans.

To resolve this issue, I will suggest that a strict This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
be created
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prevent
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 users from littering the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Additionally
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soon
 as they are filled
 up to avoid the overflow of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexcrementsoilmuckmudstainground
dirt
. This will aid in environmental cleanliness.

I hope this can be addressed
.

Yours faithfully
,

Sarah Adams