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You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park.Write a letter to the head of the city park department .In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do.

You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park. Write a letter to the head of the city park department. In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do. 2ekj
Dear Sir, I am writing to convey my concern of the accumulation of waste and also the management and methods of waste disposal in our local park. To begin, waste management is a vital aspect of a health conscious society, the neglect is unavoidably disastrous to health of people. It has become a subject of immense worry the effects of the poor waste management on residents around the local park; the trash cans are overflowing with dirts, spoiled, rottening foods, empty water and beverage cans to rubber bags. When it rains the waste flows into the walkways, roads and drainage systems causing blockage of free water movement. Not to mention the area has inevitably become a breeding ground for snakes, rodents and mosquitoes. The unpleasant smell from the waste makes the park quite uncomfortable to spend ones leisure time. This dire situation has quickly emanated into an environmental hazard. With respect to the declined situation, a regular disposal of the waste bins at least three times daily is required. Furthermore, residents should be properly educated on their attitude to waste disposal, also strict sanctions should be put in place against defaulters. I look forward to a prompt response. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir,

I am writing to convey my concern of the accumulation of
waste
and
also
the management and methods of
waste
disposal in our local park.

To
begin
,
waste
management is a vital aspect of a health conscious society, the neglect is
unavoidably
disastrous to health of
people
. It has become a subject of immense worry the effects of the poor
waste
management on residents around the local park; the trash cans are overflowing with
dirts
, spoiled,
rottening
foods, empty water and beverage cans to rubber bags. When it rains the
waste
flows into the walkways, roads and drainage systems causing blockage of free water movement. Not to mention the area has
inevitably
become a breeding ground for snakes, rodents and mosquitoes. The unpleasant smell from the
waste
makes
the park quite uncomfortable to spend ones leisure time. This dire situation has
quickly
emanated into an environmental hazard.

With respect to the declined situation, a regular disposal of the
waste
bins at least three times daily
is required
.
Furthermore
, residents should be
properly
educated on their attitude to
waste
disposal,
also
strict sanctions should
be put
in place against defaulters.

I look forward to a prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park. Write a letter to the head of the city park department. In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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