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you have recently received a letter from friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job.

you have recently received a letter from friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 3nNd

Dear XYZ, Hope you and your family doing good in this pandemic. I am writing this letter in regards to your request for suggestion on joining the job or attending the college. On a personal note, I feel that the joining the job would be a better option rather then attending the full time college, because now even multiple university are offering online and night class. College Courses will only provide a theoretical knowledge and very less of practical, which indeed you wont like it at all. Even though attending the college will give you a additional certificate which in return add extra weightage in your resume. However, without any practical knowledge the certificate will be of no use. Again, I have numerous friends even those all were confused like you in the both and later they took decision to Join the college for extra certification, but later it ended up in quitting their job and even losing their interest in studies after couple of month. Even though, there are multiple source of income in your house, its always good to have a very own personal source of income and financial independent. And there are several Jobs in the market likes Data entry, BPO where even you can do work from home. And not require to travel to Office. In conclusion, I would say in today's fast running life, where work and studies goes parallelly. In my opinion I would suggest you should start working and if feel you could join any college with Online course or night class. RegardsXYZ

Dear XYZ,

Hope you and your family doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 in this pandemic. I am writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 your request for suggestion on joining the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 or attending the college. On a personal note, I feel that the joining the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 would be a better option rather
Did you mean "than"? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.than
then
 attending the full time college, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 even multiple university are offering online and night This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. College Courses will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 provide a theoretical knowledge and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 less of practical, which indeed
 you Please make sure you mean 'wont' (a habit), not "won't"/"won’t" (short for 'will not')?won'twon’t
wont
 like it at all. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
 attending the college will give you Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 additional certificate which in return This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 extra weightage in your resume. However
, without any practical knowledge the certificate will be of no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. Again, I have numerous friends even those all were confused
 like you in the both and later they took decision to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
Join
 the college for extra certification, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 later it ended up in quitting their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 and even losing their interest in studies after It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 month. Even though
, there are multiple Possible agreement error. Did you mean "sources"?sources
source
 of income in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, its always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 personal source of income and financial independent. And there are several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
Jobs
 in the market likes Data entry, BPO where even you can do work from home. And not require Did you mean "traveling", "travelling"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.travelingtravelling
to travel
 to Office.

In conclusion
, I would say in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 running life, where work and studies goes Possible spelling mistake found.parallelparallelsparalleled
parallelly
. In my opinion I would suggest you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working and if feel you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 any college with Online course or night This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

Possible spelling mistake found.Regards XYZ
RegardsXYZ