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you are attending an extra class at a center. however you will need some time off. write to the manager of the center

you are attending an extra class at a center. however you will need some time off. write to the manager of the center 2xROX
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that I am in need of taking some time off from next week to the end of this month. I have been taking part in the extra class at your center for 3 months and have learned a lot here. But I am afraid I will not be able to attend the class for some next lectures due to my semester examination schedule at school. I will be busy preparing for the tests for some weeks lasting till the end of this month. After finishing all the semester exams at the beginning of January, I would be ready to back to your center to continue my course. I would be grateful if you could let me know if I could provide any further information regarding this request. Yours faithfully, Rachel
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I am in need of taking
some
time off from
next
week to the
end
of this month. I have been taking part in the extra
class
at your center for 3 months and have learned a lot here.
But
I am afraid I will not be able to attend the
class
for
some
next
lectures due to my semester examination schedule at school. I will be busy preparing for the
tests
for
some
weeks lasting till the
end
of this month. After finishing all the semester exams at the beginning of January, I would be ready to back to your center to continue my course. I would be grateful if you could
let
me know if I could provide any
further
information regarding this request.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rachel
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IELTS letter you are attending an extra class at a center. however you will need some time off. write to the manager of the center

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
141 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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