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A magazine wants to include contributors from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’.

A magazine wants to include contributors from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. gqWel

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about your article, ’The book that influenced me most’, to inform you about a book which has had a great effect on me. It is called Journey To The Center Of Earth which is written by Jules Verne, one of the most famous writers in the world. The book genre is science fiction and explains how people made a trip to the heart of earth. The type of this book is science fiction because when the writer was writing, no one had any information about the earth's core. I like the story because it shows me how I can imagine and illustrate things in my mind, even though I do not have much information about. For example, when I was child, I decided to create an elevator and I used a basket and string to create it. I did not have enough information, but I could create a childish one. I think this book could attract many people due to its story. I have read it several times since I got it as my birthday gift and I could say I had new, fresh, and adventure all times. Moreover, the book’s writer is the best one and their books are always top selling ones. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Amir Akhavan

Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

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