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you are attending an evening course in school. write a letter to the director of the school to complain about the couse.

you are attending an evening course in school. write a letter to the director of the school to complain about the couse. 8aBdm
Dear John, I am writing this letter to complain about the evening International Media course in our school. To introduce myself, I am John studying in 11th standard. I've opted International Media course as I am extremely interested in media. I would like to bring this to notice that the syllabus covered during the class is obsolete and outdated. Having an immense interest in International media, to know who media work in other parts of the country, consequently, I decided to choose this course. Unfortunately, the course curriculum shared with all of us previously commencing the course was extremely exciting, on the contrary, most of the thing being taught I already found them on internetpriorjoining the course. I would like to request you if committee revise the course and add the latest topics in the course. This will help students to build the motivation to attend the course. Waiting to hear from you Yours faithfully, Nandini
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to complain about the evening International
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Media
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course
in our school.

To introduce myself, I am John studying in 11th standard. I've opted International
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Media
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as I am
extremely
interested in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
. I would like to bring this to notice that the syllabus covered during the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
is obsolete and outdated.

Having an immense interest in International
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
, to know who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
work in other parts of the country,
consequently
, I decided to choose this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Unfortunately, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
curriculum shared with all of us previously commencing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
was
extremely
exciting,
on the contrary
, most of the thing
being taught
I already found them on
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internetpriorjoining
the course.

I would like to request you if committee revise the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
the latest topics in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
students to build the motivation to attend the course.

Waiting to hear from you

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nandini
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IELTS letter you are attending an evening course in school. write a letter to the director of the school to complain about the couse.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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