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You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell: – What course you are studying – What you are not happy about – What you expect from the school director.

You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell: – What course you are studying – What you are not happy about – What you expect from the school director. PVV2w
Dear Ali, Now that the weekend of my birthday party is over and you have hopefully arrived home safely, I just wanted to let you know again how much your birthday present means to me. I don’t think I’ve ever received something quite as original as this lovely, hand-made photo album with photos and notes reminding me of our childhood. I think that these memories have helped us stick together and I hope that, although we live a long way apart now, I can add to this album every year when we see each other. With the stationery collection that my mother gave me and the calligraphy set I got from my dad, I can easily continue to add to this work of art! It’s sad that you could only be there for the party and not for my actual birthday. I went canoeing with my parents and my sister at Barley Creek, the lovely lake resort that we often used to go to when we were young. Do you remember the tall trees and the calm atmosphere there? Well, everything is still as it used to be. Even the castle restaurant is still there, where I topped the day off with a fancy dinner. What a memorable day it was! Looking forwart to hearing form you Lots of love.
Dear Ali,

Now
that the weekend of my birthday party is over and you have
hopefully
arrived home
safely
, I
just
wanted to
let
you know again how much your birthday present means to me. I don’t
think
I’ve ever received something quite as original as this lovely, hand-made photo album with photos and notes reminding me of our childhood.

I
think
that these memories have
helped
us stick together and I hope that, although we
live
a long way apart
now
, I can
add
to this album every year when we
see
each other. With the stationery collection that my mother gave me and the calligraphy set I
got
from my dad, I can
easily
continue to
add
to this work of art!

It’s sad that you could
only
be there for the party and not for my actual birthday. I went canoeing with my parents and my sister at Barley Creek, the lovely lake resort that we
often
used
to go to when we were young. Do you remember the tall trees and the calm atmosphere there? Well, everything is
still
as it
used
to be. Even the castle restaurant is
still
there, where I topped the day off with a fancy dinner. What a memorable day it was!

Looking
forwart
to hearing form you

Lots of
love
.
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IELTS letter You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell: – What course you are studying – What you are not happy about – What you expect from the school director.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
220 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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