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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you’ve done since the course suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you’ve done since the course suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer qVVBX
Dear sir, Hi my name is saarthi pandey, I recently took an admission in one your crash course of making healthy dishes. I must say that it was a delight to complete course under the guidance of such expertise and experienced chefs, all in all my my family and friends enjoyed and found appetizing to dishes which I learned and baked for them on one of the yoga campaign held at my house. Specially these dishes are helpful to maintain certain parameters of our health well being like cholesterol, blood pressure, diabetes. I found quiet positive results among the ones whom I made the dishes. Addition to that all the ingredients are easily available online or at grocery shop which make the course more feasible to opt. I would like to suggest institute to have classes on the festive and continental foods as the season of festive is yet to come and we can prepare ourselves in advance for that. Kind regards, Yours sincerely, Saarthi
Dear sir,

Hi my name is
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saarthi
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pandey
, I recently took an admission in one your crash course of making healthy
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dishes
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say that it was a delight to complete course under the guidance of such expertise and experienced chefs, all in all
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my my
family and friends enjoyed and found appetizing to
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dishes
which I learned and baked for them on one of the yoga campaign held at my
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house
.

Specially
these
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dishes
are helpful to maintain certain parameters of our health
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well being
like cholesterol, blood pressure, diabetes. I found quiet
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positive
results among the ones whom I made the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dishes
. Addition to that all the ingredients are
easily
available online or at grocery shop which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the course more feasible to opt. I would like to suggest institute to have classes on the festive and continental foods as the season of festive is
yet
to
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come and
we can prepare ourselves in advance for that.

Kind regards,

Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you’ve done since the course suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

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