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A friend I made while studying abroad has written to ask me for help in finding a job in my Country. I have heard about a job in a local Company that might be suitable for him

A friend I made while studying abroad has written to ask me for help in finding a job in my Country. I have heard about a job in a local Company that might be suitable for him 6xxGx
Dear Marko, Hope this mail finds you well. I’m writing in regard to give you information’s’ about the job opportunity that has occurred just today. It is a senior Project Manager position, in the local company Gradina Zemun d. o. o. Gradina Zemun d. o. o. is the fastest growing local company in Construction business. They are making both residential and non residential buildings. They are expanding their business in to the area of making Industrial buildings too, such as warehouses and they need experienced Project manager with the experience for more than 10 years within this area. You, or some other candidate should lead the project from the very beginning of the contracting through the complete process of construction till the end of the project. That shell include getting all the documents signed by Supervisor and Investor in order to provide all data needed for the financial/Commercial department to prepare Invoices for all the works and services provided by Gradina Zemun d. o. o. company. I believe that this job could be great opportunity for you because the job location will be in Belgrade, where I could help you at the beginning in finding accomodation and make you adaptation period easier. Also, it is good that you have great experience in this matter as you are doing the similar job at your country, so that will help as well. Gradina Zemun is knowen for taking good care for their employees, either through the further educations for their employees or good compensations and wages as well. Applying process is easy. Go to their website (www. Gradinazemun. rs /careers) and search for the Possition Project Manager Belgrade. You can apply there. Once you have been applied for the position, just let me know, so I could ask them about further employing process. I hope this information help.
Dear Marko,

Hope this mail finds you well. I’m writing in regard to give you information’s’ about the
job
opportunity that

has occurred
just
today
. It is a senior
Project
Manager position, in the local
company
Gradina
Zemun
d. o. o.

Gradina
Zemun
d. o. o. is the fastest growing local
company
in Construction business. They are making both

residential and
non residential
buildings. They are expanding their business in to the area of making Industrial

buildings too, such as
warehouses and
they need experienced
Project
manager with the experience for more

than 10 years within this area. You, or
some
other candidate should lead the
project
from the
very
beginning

of the contracting through the complete process of construction till the
end
of the
project
.
That shell include


getting all the documents signed by Supervisor and Investor in order to provide all data needed for the

financial/Commercial department to prepare Invoices for all the works and services provided by
Gradina


Zemun
d. o. o.
company
.

I believe that this
job
could be great opportunity for you
because
the
job
location will be in Belgrade, where I

could
help
you at the beginning in finding
accomodation
and
make
you adaptation period easier.
Also
, it is

good
that you have great experience in this matter as you are doing the similar
job
at your country,
so
that

will
help
as well
.
Gradina
Zemun
is
knowen
for taking
good
care for their employees, either through the

further
educations for their employees or
good
compensations and wages
as well
.

Applying process is easy. Go to their website (
www
.
Gradinazemun
.
rs
/careers) and search for the
Possition


Project Manager Belgrade. You can apply there.

Once you have
been applied
for the position,
just
let
me know,
so
I could ask them about
further
employing

process.

I hope this information
help
.
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IELTS letter A friend I made while studying abroad has written to ask me for help in finding a job in my Country. I have heard about a job in a local Company that might be suitable for him

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  American English
7 paragraphs
306 words
5.5
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