Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away 3aarn
Dear Mrs. Miller, I'm Nancy. Currently, I'm working at the Shaw company with my position as a teller. Today, I'm going to writing a letter for asking you about the day of some time off work. In fact, next week, exactly on the 30th, April 2021. My brother will get married. He invited me intent his wedding. Actually, at the end of the month the company very busy. But, my brother has only a sister is me. So, I would like to tell you who consider me absent on one day above. About my work, I prepared everything already on my computer. In addition, I also told Ms. Linda about my situation and she was willing to help me that day. If you approve my letter, I will send my work to her. I hope you understand and give me one day off. I look forward to hearing from you. Regard, Nancy
Dear Mrs. Miller, I'm Nancy.
Currently
, I'm working at the Shaw
company
with my position as a teller.
Today
, I'm going to writing a letter for asking you about the day of
some
time off work. In fact,
next
week, exactly on the 30th, April 2021. My brother will
get
married. He invited me intent his wedding. Actually, at the
end
of the month the
company
very
busy.
But
, my brother has
only
a sister is me.
So
, I would like to
tell
you who consider me absent on one day above. About my work, I prepared everything already on my computer.
In addition
, I
also
told
Ms. Linda about my
situation and
she was willing to
help
me that day. If you approve my letter, I will
send
my work to her. I hope you understand and give me one day off. I look forward to hearing from you. Regard, Nancy
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: