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You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, - explain your situation - describe the accommodation you require - say when you will need it

You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, - explain your situation - describe the accommodation you require - say when you will need it kYYnW
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been enrolled to a one semester course in Data Analysis at your college. The issue is that I neither have relatives nor friends in Greenmount, thus I cannot find a place to stay during my education. I hope that your office can assist me with this problem. Although I used to live in a large house, I would like to rent a compact appartment, as I believe it would be cheaper. However, I expect that it will have all utilities like water, electricity, internet, etc. I do not mind if I have a roommate, so that we can split the rent payment. While the course starts in one month, on 1st of September, I am going to come one week before this date, since I would like to see the campus and explore the city. Therefore, I recon that you can find a couple of options by this time. Thank you for your help. Yours faithfully, Taylor.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have
been enrolled
to a one semester course in Data Analysis at your college. The issue is that I neither have relatives nor friends in
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Greenmount
,
thus
I cannot find a place to stay during my education. I hope that your office can assist me with this problem.

Although I
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used
to
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live
in a large
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house
, I would like to rent a compact
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appartment
, as I believe it would be cheaper.
However
, I
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expect
that it will have all utilities like water, electricity, internet, etc. I do not mind if I have a roommate,
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so
that we can split the rent payment.

While the course
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starts
in one month, on 1st of September, I am going to
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come
one week
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before
this date, since I would like to
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see
the campus and explore the city.
Therefore
,
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I recon
that you can find a couple of options by this time.

Thank you for your
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help
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Taylor.
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IELTS letter You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, - explain your situation - describe the accommodation you require - say when you will need it

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6.0
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