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You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it g55aL
I hope this letter finds you well. Since we started working remotely because of the pandemic, it's been a long time to meet you guys. I'm writing this letter to remind you about a paramount day of my life. As we spent one year together and I want to say thanks for your love and blessings. On the occasion of my anniversary, I arranged a party at my home. I can't express my feelings about the moment you all were there and presented me with this adorable gift of iPhone airports. I would love to inform you that I need it because I lost my old ones. Again I appreciate your efforts in love to being a part of my special day I know it is expensive gifts and has a unique feature of noise cancellation from a third party or any unusual sound. I'm using these airports to attend our conference meeting with the board of directors as well as sometimes when I have to check the project performance with other team members. so it is been really useful for me. I'm missed our sense of community and camaraderie. I hope we will be working soon from the office. take care.
I hope this letter finds you well. Since we
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started
working
remotely
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because
of the pandemic, it's been a long time to
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meet
you guys. I'm writing this letter to remind you about a paramount day of my life. As we spent one year together and I want to say thanks for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and blessings. On the occasion of my anniversary, I arranged a party at my home.

I can't express my feelings about the moment you all were there and presented me with this adorable gift of iPhone airports. I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to inform you that I need it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I lost my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
ones.

Again I appreciate your efforts in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to being a part of my special day I know it is expensive gifts and has a unique feature of noise cancellation from a third party or any unusual sound. I'm using these airports to attend our conference meeting with the board of directors
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
when I
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have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the project performance with other team members.
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so
it
is been
really
useful for me.

I'm missed our sense of community and camaraderie. I hope we will be working
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
from the office.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
take
care.

IELTS letter You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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