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You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell: – What course you are studying – What you are not happy about – What you expect from the school director.

You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell: – What course you are studying – What you are not happy about – What you expect from the school director. Nrrgy
It is to inform you I am attending the night course at the school, It is a short course of cooking healthy food at home. Our course is consist of three module, 1st Month based on theoretical study whereas other two month are about the practical. To explain further, I am not happy about the current way of teaching as per schedule we have to start practical work from the start of second month. Unfortunately, second month of course is near to end we still have away from practical cooking classes. To conclude, I am expecting that you may ask our course coordinator to start the practical classes without further delay because we have only one month a head of this cooking course of healthy food. I hope you will consider my request. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
It is to inform you I am attending the night
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course
at the school, It is a short
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course
of cooking healthy food at home. Our
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course
is consist of three
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module
, 1st
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Month
based on theoretical study whereas other two
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month
are about the practical.

To
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explain
further
, I am not happy about the
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current
way of teaching as per schedule we
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have to
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start
practical work from the
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start
of second
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month
. Unfortunately, second
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month
of
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course
is near to
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end
we
still
have away from practical cooking classes.

To conclude
, I am expecting that you may ask our
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course
coordinator to
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start
the practical classes without
further
delay
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because
we have
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only
one
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month
a head of this cooking
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course
of healthy food. I hope you will consider my request.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

IELTS letter You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell: – What course you are studying – What you are not happy about – What you expect from the school director.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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