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Hello Manager Subject: Jazz concert I glad to write down this email for the concert which was organised by you. i hope we can have some more shows in coming days. Actually, There is a number of things which i really like as the sound technology it was amazing i heared every word clearly and enjoy the every single word of the concert other thing is sitting arrangement i saw that every person was enjoying it from every corner of the playground. The other things which made me really upset that was a no proper slot for the wheelchair. it was not good for ourself music belong to everybody so every individual should have a proper access to of it. Adding to it, according to me, we were not allowed to hurt somebody feeling every public and private place has made an arrangement to give special service to the physical challenged people. Well, Meanwhile, i can give some advice, from next time, you can set some special budget for the disabled person. you can create a seperate path for their inc

Hello Manager Subject: Jazz concert I glad to write down this email for the concert which was organised by you. i hope we can have some more shows in coming days. Actually, There is a number of things which i really like as the sound technology it was amazing i heared every word clearly and enjoy the every single word of the concert other thing is sitting arrangement i saw that every person was enjoying it from every corner of the playground. The other things which made me really upset that was a no proper slot for the wheelchair. it was not good for ourself music belong to everybody so every individual should have a proper access to of it. Adding to it, according to me, we were not allowed to hurt somebody feeling every public and private place has made an arrangement to give special service to the physical challenged people. Well, Meanwhile, i can give some advice, from next time, you can set some special budget for the disabled person. you can create a seperate path for their inc KwwB3
Hello Manager Subject: Jazz concert I glad to write down this email for the concert which was organised by you. i hope we can have some more shows in coming days. Actually, There is a number of things which i really like as the sound technology it was amazing i heared every word clearly and enjoy the every single word of the concert other thing is sitting arrangement i saw that every person was enjoying it from every corner of the playground. The other things which made me really upset that was a no proper slot for the wheelchair. it was not good for ourself music belong to everybody so every individual should have a proper access to of it. Adding to it, according to me, we were not allowed to hurt somebody feeling every public and private place has made an arrangement to give special service to the physical challenged people. Well, Meanwhile, i can give some advice, from next time, you can set some special budget for the disabled person. you can create a seperate path for their incomeing and ongoing. Even, you could place some adjustable chairs which can change its configuration according to the person requirement. That all Thank you I am assuming that you will work on this problem
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Subject: Jazz concert

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I
glad to write down this email for the concert which was
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organised
by you.
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i
hope we can have
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some
more
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shows
in coming days. Actually, There is a number of things which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
really
like

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as
the sound technology it was amazing i
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heared
every word
clearly
and enjoy the every single word of the concert other thing is sitting arrangement
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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saw
that every person was enjoying it from

every corner of the playground.

The other things which made me
really
upset that was a no proper slot for the wheelchair.
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it
was not
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good
for
The term is non-standard and not widely accepted.
ourself
music belong to everybody
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so
every individual should have
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a proper access
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to


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of
it. Adding to it, according to me, we were not
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allowed
to hurt somebody feeling every public and private place has made an arrangement to give special service to the physical challenged
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people
.

Well, Meanwhile,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can give
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some
advice, from
next
time, you can set
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some
special budget for the disabled person.
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you
can create a
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seperate
path for their
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incomeing
and ongoing. Even, you could place

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
adjustable chairs which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
its configuration according to the person requirement.

That all

Thank you

I am assuming that you will work on this problem
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IELTS letter Hello Manager Subject: Jazz concert I glad to write down this email for the concert which was organised by you. i hope we can have some more shows in coming days. Actually, There is a number of things which i really like as the sound technology it was amazing i heared every word clearly and enjoy the every single word of the concert other thing is sitting arrangement i saw that every person was enjoying it from every corner of the playground. The other things which made me really upset that was a no proper slot for the wheelchair. it was not good for ourself music belong to everybody so every individual should have a proper access to of it. Adding to it, according to me, we were not allowed to hurt somebody feeling every public and private place has made an arrangement to give special service to the physical challenged people. Well, Meanwhile, i can give some advice, from next time, you can set some special budget for the disabled person. you can create a seperate path for their inc

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