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You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say. In your letter, you should tell: • how you lost the certificate • why you need it • what you expect the principal to do.

You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say. In your letter, you should tell: • how you lost the certificate • why you need it • what you expect the principal to do. K613
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have done the class and handed in a certificate, but forgot it when I return my home. Firstly, I need to explain how I lost it. I received the certificate in the class room and thought that I put it in my bag. However, when I took a taxi to come back home, I forgot to bring my bag from the vehicle which means I left it in the taxi then I realised that I lost them. The reason that I would like my certificate is to submit my new job. I currently applied job and the company asked me to give them my certificate as a proof of graduation. This proof is very required to have my new career. I would like you to provide a new one. As I mentioned, it is very significant to me and I need to have an alternative one, so I request you to give me again. I am willing to pay the extra costs if necessary. Please let me know what is your decision to resolve this problem. Your sincerely, dfsdfaa
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I have done the
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class
and handed in a
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certificate
,
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but
forgot it when I return my home.

Firstly
, I need to
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explain
how I lost it. I received the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
room and
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thought
that I put it in my bag.
However
, when I took a taxi to
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come
back home, I forgot to bring my bag from the vehicle which means I
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left
it in the taxi then I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that I lost them.

The reason that I would like my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
is to submit my new job. I
currently
applied job and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
asked me to give them my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
as a proof of graduation. This proof is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
required to have my new career.

I would like you to provide a new one. As I mentioned, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
significant to me and I need to have an alternative one,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I request you to give me again. I am willing to pay the extra costs if necessary.
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Please
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let
me know what is your decision to resolve this problem.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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dfsdfaa
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IELTS letter You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say. In your letter, you should tell: • how you lost the certificate • why you need it • what you expect the principal to do.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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