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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher in your letter give details of your job Explain why it is impory to you . Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher in your letter give details of your job Explain why it is impory to you. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference oYG3
Respected Mr. Smith, I am Jordan, who was your student in B. Sc. Nursing class of 2016. I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to seek a letter of reference from you to support my application for the job of a nursing tutor in Brock university. This is a great opportunity to get my dream job as I have been always passionate for teaching profession. Moreover, this study institute is marked as the one of top ranked universities. So, it would be such a great pleasure to become a member of it. Along with this, it will also help me to earn good money for my family members as my fatger has recently retired. It will be great if you can shed light in my character in the letter. As well as, your reference regarding my academic achievements will really effect my application. I hope that you will be happy to recommend me for this position. I am looking forward to receiving your reference letter. Thanks in advance. Yours Sincerely, Jordan.
Respected Mr. Smith, I am Jordan, who was your student in
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.
B. Sc.
Nursing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
of 2016. I hope you are doing well. I am writing this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
to seek a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
of reference from you to support my application for the job of a nursing tutor in Brock university. This is a great opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
my dream job as I have been always passionate for teaching profession.
Moreover
, this study institute
is marked
as the one of top ranked universities.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it would be such a great pleasure to become a member of it. Along with this, it will
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to earn
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
money for my family members as my
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fatger
has recently retired. It will be great if you can shed light in my character in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
.
As well
as, your reference regarding my academic achievements will
really
Did you mean "affect"?
effect
my application. I hope that you will be happy to recommend me for this position. I am looking forward to receiving your reference
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
. Thanks in advance. Yours
Sincerely
, Jordan.
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher in your letter give details of your job Explain why it is impory to you. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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