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Letter for the missing item on the train

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Dear Sir, I am a regular commuter of the train no. 17, which runs between Toronto and Hamilton. I have written this letter to inform you that I have lost a bag in the train. It is a laptop bag of Dell company which consisted two books and a lunch box. It is of navy-blue color with two side pockets. The latest memory regarding the bag’s position was on the seat besides me. When I left the train, I forgot to take it with me in a hurry. I travelled yesterday on in this train and my seat number was E-43. If you find any thing similar, please contact me. I have attached my details with this letter. It is my humble request that you look into this situation as soon as possible. I am waiting for your response. Regards, Mitesh.

Dear Sir,

I am a regular commuter of the train no. 17, which runs between Toronto and Hamilton. I have written this letter to inform you that I have lost a bag in the train.

It is a laptop bag of Dell This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 which consisted two books and a lunch box. It is of navy-blue color with two side pockets. The latest memory regarding the bag’s position was on the seat besides
 me. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the train, I forgot to take it with me in a hurry. I travelled yesterday on in this train and my seat number was E-43.

If you find Did you mean "anything"?anything
any thing
 similar, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 contact me. I have attached my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 with this letter. It is my humble request that you look into this situation as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

I am waiting for your response.

Regards,

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Mitesh
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IELTS letter Letter for the missing item on the train

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

141 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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