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Letter for the missing item on the train

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Dear Sir, I am a regular commuter of the train no. 17, which runs between Toronto and Hamilton. I have written this letter to inform you that I have lost a bag in the train. It is a laptop bag of Dell company which consisted two books and a lunch box. It is of navy-blue color with two side pockets. The latest memory regarding the bag’s position was on the seat besides me. When I left the train, I forgot to take it with me in a hurry. I travelled yesterday on in this train and my seat number was E-43. If you find any thing similar, please contact me. I have attached my details with this letter. It is my humble request that you look into this situation as soon as possible. I am waiting for your response. Regards, Mitesh.
Dear Sir,

I am a regular commuter of the train no. 17, which runs between Toronto and Hamilton. I have written this letter to inform you that I have lost a bag in the train.

It is a laptop bag of Dell
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company
which consisted two books and a lunch box. It is of navy-blue color with two side pockets. The latest memory regarding the bag’s position was on the seat
besides
me. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
the train, I forgot to take it with me in a hurry. I travelled yesterday on in this train and my seat number was E-43.

If you find
Did you mean "anything"?
any thing
similar,
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please
contact me. I have attached my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
with this letter. It is my humble request that you look into this situation as
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soon
as possible.

I am waiting for your response.

Regards,

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Mitesh
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IELTS letter Letter for the missing item on the train

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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