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You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview

You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview ejjA
Dear Mr. John, I am Sandeep, an alumna of the Bluegill University and a volunteer responsible for conducting informal interviews with the eligible candidates. I am writing this letter to inform regarding your interview for the University. I have been assigned as your interviewer. The interview will be conducted as face-to-face through online video call. Firstly, you have to provide your registration Identification number for verification. Secondly, you might have to describe briefly about yourself including your ambition, hobbies and so on. This will be an informal interview, so you do not need to stress too much. Incase if you are not interested to join the interview, you can cancel it before twenty four hours of the scheduled time through our online portal. we have scheduled the interview on next Wednesday at 12 noon. If the time is not matching your schedule please make sure to inform us alteast 4 hours beforehand, and also provide a conveinent time for conducting the interview. Meet you soon in the interview. Yours Failthfully, Sandeep V
Dear Mr. John,

I am Sandeep, an alumna of the Bluegill University and a volunteer responsible for conducting informal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interviews
with the eligible candidates. I am writing this letter to inform regarding your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
for the University.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
been assigned
as your interviewer. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
will
be conducted
as face-to-face through online video call.
Firstly
, you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
provide your registration Identification number for verification.
Secondly
, you might
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
briefly
about yourself including your ambition, hobbies and
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so
on.

This will be an informal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
,
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so
you do not need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
too much.
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Incase
if you are not interested to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
, you can cancel it
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before
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
twenty four
hours of the scheduled time through our online portal.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
we
have scheduled the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
on
next
Wednesday at 12 noon. If the time is not matching your schedule
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to inform us
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alteast
4 hours beforehand, and
also
provide a
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conveinent
time for conducting the interview.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Meet
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
in the interview.

Yours
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Failthfully
,

Sandeep V

IELTS letter You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview

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171 words
6.0
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