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Invited by a friend for Holidays

Invited by a friend for Holidays pR8O0

Dear Bayo, Thank you so much for your invite, that is very kind of you and i really appreciate your generous offer to join you in Paris for summer. I'd really like to visit but unfortunately I won't be able to make it because of my tight schdule. I was recently promoted to head of my department and this currently demands that i spend more time at the office. I am sure you would remember how much i love to take responsibility when we were back in college and we worked together as joint head of class, Good memories! I would love to join you as soon as my leave application is granted, please let me know if you would be open to we postponing for winter because that is most likely the time my leave would be granted. I am aware there are so many outdoor activities we can do together and i can't wait for us to have fun together. if anything changes at work and i am able to come sooner, I would let you know. looking foreward to hearing from you! ridwan

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love
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join
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soon
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leave
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, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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let
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we postponing
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because
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leave
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 outdoor activities we can do together and Did you mean "I"?I
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changes
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come
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let
 you know.

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 to hearing from you!

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRidwan
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