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invited for a visit and you can't make it

invited for a visit and you can't make it bYqgY

Dear Bayo, Thank you for your invite, that is extremely kind of you and i really appreciate your generous offer to join you in Paris for summer. I'd really like to visit unfortunately I won't be able to make it due to the fact of my tight schedule. I was recently promoted to head of my department and this currently demands that i spend more time at the office. I am sure you would remember how much i love to take responsibility when we were back in college, and we worked together as joint head of class, Good memories! I would love to join you as soon as my leave application is granted, please let me know if you would be open to we're postponing for winter due to the fact that is most likely the time my leave would be granted. I am aware there are consequently a number of outdoor activities we can do together and I can't wait for us to have fun together. If anything changes at work and I am able to come sooner, I would let you know. Looking forward to hearing from you! Ridwan

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Bayo
,

Thank you for your invite, that is
extremely
 kind of you and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
really
 appreciate your generous offer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in Paris for summer. I'd really
 like to visit unfortunately I won't be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it due to the fact of my tight schedule.

I was recently promoted to head of my department and this currently
 demands that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 spend more time at the office. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sure you would remember how much Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to take responsibility when we were back in college, and we worked together as joint head of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
 memories!

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
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soon
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leave
 application is granted
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you would be open to we're postponing for winter due to the fact that is
 most likely the time my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 would be granted
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am aware there are consequently
 a number of outdoor activities we can do together and I can't wait for us to have fun together. If anything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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work and
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come
 sooner, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know.

Looking forward to hearing from you!

Possible spelling mistake found.Rid wan
Ridwan