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You are a student at an english language school. Write a letter to your landlord

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Dear Mr. John, I along with few other students from Christ school are staying at your property for over a year. I am writing to inform you that we have not had hot -water for quite some time and as a result, many of us have fallen sick during winter. Speaking about the problem, I believe the issue is with the heater that was installed a year ago. The internal circuit of the radiator seems to be damaged beyond repair as your workmen have failed to fix it. We believe the only option is to replace the existing heater with a new one. Under the terms of our lease agreement, it is the landlord's responsibility to replace any damaged equipment in the building. Alternatively, we will replace this and will deduct the respective amount from the next rental payment. We would like to know your response regarding both the proposed options. Yours Sincerely, Sasank
Dear Mr. John,

I along with few other students from Christ school are staying at your property for over a year. I am writing to inform you that we have not had hot -water for quite
some
time and
as a result
,
many
of us have fallen sick during winter.

Speaking about the problem, I believe the issue is with the heater that
was installed
a year ago. The internal circuit of the radiator seems to
be damaged
beyond repair as your workmen have failed to
fix
it. We believe the
only
option is to replace the existing heater with a new one.

Under the terms of our lease agreement, it is the landlord's responsibility to replace any damaged equipment in the building.

Alternatively
, we will replace this and will deduct the respective amount from the
next
rental payment.

We would like to know your response regarding both the proposed options.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sasank
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IELTS letter You are a student at an english language school. Write a letter to your landlord

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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