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academic letter for study position

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Dear Professor Geertman I was physics student but I found the city more interesting than physics as an alive creature so I changed my major to urban planning 3 years ago, now I am the last year urban planning student at the art university of Tabriz, my GPA is 17. 43 of 20 (3. 64 of 4) in bachelor degree. I am interested in becoming involved in urban planning because of this I have reviewed your faculty profile and I am interested in your interested subjects such as urban planning and, sustainability subjects and spatial planning. I really got affected by your works and it will be a great honor for me to work with you. I am looking for you as a professor who takes me as a student for fall 2021 and i will start my master at Utrecht University I attached my cv and my 6-semester transcript. if you ok I’ll be happy to say more about myself to you. I look forward to hearing from you.

Dear Professor Possible spelling mistake found.German
Geertman


I was physics student This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I found the city more interesting than physics as an alive creature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 my major to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplan
planning
 3 years ago, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am the last year You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplan
planning
 student at the art university of Tabriz, my GPA is 17. 43 of 20 (3. 64 of 4) in bachelor degree.

I am interested
 in becoming involved in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplan
planning
because of this
 I have reviewed your faculty Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).profile, and
profile and
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 in your interested subjects such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
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planning
 and, sustainability subjects and spatial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplan
planning
. I really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by your works and it will be a great honor for me to work with you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking for you as a professor who takes me as a student for fall 2021 and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 my master at Utrecht University

I attached my Possible spelling mistake found.CVCDcmCTVUVcf
cv
 and my 6-semester transcript. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 you ok I’ll be happy to say more about myself to you.

I look forward to hearing from you. 