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Letter to a hotel for confirmation on some details

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Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to seek some information on the weekend getaway package available at your hotel in the city Agra. First of all, I am planning to stay at your hotel with my family for the coming weekend from 10th to 12th September. Can you please let me know the availability of 2 double-bed deluxe rooms and the tariff for them on weekend? I have a travel voucher and would like to understand if it can be used and can I get any discounts or not. I got this travel discount card the last time I stayed at your hotel. For your reference, the number on the card is 0123M. In addition to this, please let me know about the special events in the city during my stay, especially related to heritage programs depicting the traditions and culture of this beautiful city. I have heard a lot about Mumtaz-E-Mahal show which is a live performance by number of artists including folk dance. Can you please let me know the prices for the same? I would appreciate your prompt response for me to have a booking in advance to avoid last minute chaos. Your faithfully Sam Thomas
Dear Sir,

I am writing in regard to seek
some
information on the weekend getaway package available at your hotel in the city Agra.

First of all
, I am planning to stay at your hotel with my family for the coming weekend from 10th to 12th September. Can you
please
let
me know the availability of 2 double-bed deluxe rooms and the tariff for them on weekend?

I have a travel voucher and would like to understand if it can be
used
and can I
get
any discounts or not. I
got
this travel discount card the last time I stayed at your hotel. For your reference, the number on the card is 0123M.

In addition
to this,
please
let
me know about the special
events
in the city during my stay,
especially
related to heritage programs depicting the traditions and culture of this
beautiful
city. I have heard a lot about
Mumtaz-E-Mahal
show
which is a
live
performance by number of artists including folk dance. Can you
please
let
me know the prices for the same?

I would appreciate your prompt response for me to have a booking in advance to avoid last minute chaos.

Your
faithfully


Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter Letter to a hotel for confirmation on some details

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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