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Letter to the manager to inform him that I would like to spend six months working in the company’s other head office in another country

Letter to the manager to inform him that I would like to spend six months working in the company’s other head office in another country gb1MD

Dear Madam Laura, I’m writing to inform you that I would like to work in the company’s head office in another country. I think that working in a new place and different enviroment could changes me a lot, and it might helps me develops a new skills. The other office provides an improval master classes which I’m so interestes to join. It is provides an Ielts master classes to acheive 7 and above, takiny Ielts would help me to study master in United Kingdom, and it is my goal at the moment. I asked Dana and Noor to take my place and do my work until I come back, and if the need any help I could enter a Zoom videocall so we discuss the problems. Mr. Ahmad also supported me and volunteers to help both Noor and Dana. I also would like to ask you to arrange for me the admission with the supervisers. I just notice that your cousin works there, so can you please ask her for more details about the company? And if she could guide me to a flat which located perfectly near to the company? Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Hessa Alwehibi

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 back, and if the need any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
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 we discuss the problems. Mr. Ahmad also
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help
 both Noor and Dana. I also
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supervisers
. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 notice that your cousin works there, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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please
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details
 about the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
? And if she could guide me to a flat which located perfectly
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company
? Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Possible spelling mistake found.HesseHessTessaHess a
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