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Your neighbor is burning garbage in the backyard which is causing you great inconvenience. Write a letter to the head of the municipal council . In your letter • Describe the problem • Mention when the problem began • Suggest what you think the municipal council do

Your neighbor is burning garbage in the backyard which is causing you great inconvenience. Write a letter to the head of the municipal council. In your letter • Describe the problem • Mention when the problem began • Suggest what you think the municipal council do PEnNX
Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings of the day. With reference to causing great inconvenience due to burning garbage in the backyard. I am writing to elucidate on certain concerns I faced. Primarily, My neighbor is burning garbage in the backyard which is causing various problems. Due to this the health of my family is also affected. For instance, irritation in eyes, problem in breathing especially in adults. Also, I have been observing this since long but then I thought that it is temporary. Unfortunately, now burning is noticed every day. Therefore, I decided to put my pen on paper. Additionally, I request to the municipal corporation to warn them against doing it and suggest them to avail the facility of dumping waste in the dump field of the city. However I also suggest you to collect the garbage from backyard. It will be beneficial for society and environment. I hope you will look into the mentioned concerns and take a remedial action at the earliest in order to provide a delightful experience to your patrons. Regards Yours sincerely XYZ
Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings of the day.

With reference to causing great inconvenience due to burning garbage in the backyard. I am writing to elucidate on certain concerns I faced.

Primarily
, My neighbor is burning garbage in the backyard which is causing various problems. Due to this the health of my family is
also
affected
.
For instance
, irritation in eyes, problem in breathing
especially
in adults.

Also
, I have been observing this since long
but
then I
thought
that it is temporary. Unfortunately,
now
burning
is noticed
every day.
Therefore
, I decided to put my pen on paper.

Additionally
, I request to the municipal corporation to warn them against doing it and suggest them to avail the facility of dumping waste in the dump field of the city.
However
I
also
suggest you to collect the garbage from backyard. It will be beneficial for society and environment.

I hope you will look into the mentioned concerns and take a remedial action at the earliest in order to provide a delightful experience to your patrons.

Regards

Yours
sincerely


XYZ
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IELTS letter Your neighbor is burning garbage in the backyard which is causing you great inconvenience. Write a letter to the head of the municipal council. In your letter • Describe the problem • Mention when the problem began • Suggest what you think the municipal council do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
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