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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? q9OP
Dear Mr. Musa, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to request a replacement of the identity card which is misplaced causing difficulties in my day-to-day affairs. Last Friday, I had visited the mall in the city center as I had to purchase some stationery. After reaching college, I reached for my wallet to pay for the taxi only to realize my wallet was missing. Along with some of my important cards, the student identity card was also lost. Since the identity card is the primary source for all the activities on the campus, I am facing difficulties. My entry to Library is restricted which is affecting my studies nor I am allowed to use the sports club. State transport discount card is dependent on this card and in its absence, I am forced to pay the full charge. I will be grateful if you consider the situation and advise for the issuance of the new card. Yours Sincerely, Uzair.
Dear Mr.
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Musa
,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to request a replacement of the identity
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
which
is misplaced
causing difficulties in my day-to-day affairs.

Last Friday, I had visited the mall in the city center as I had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
stationery. After reaching college, I reached for my wallet to pay for the taxi
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
to realize my wallet was missing. Along with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
, the student identity
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
was
also
lost.

Since the identity
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
is the primary source for all the activities on the campus, I am facing difficulties. My entry to Library
is restricted
which is affecting my studies nor I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the sports club. State transport discount
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
is dependent on this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
and in its absence, I
am forced
to pay the full charge.

I will be grateful if you consider the situation and advise for the issuance of the new card.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Uzair
.

IELTS letter International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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6.0
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