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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement rEW2

Dear Pathik, I hope this latter finds you well. I'm writing this latter to inform you that due to the family emergency I won't be able to come to the canada next week as my father met with an accident today. With god's grace everything is fine but he broke his ankle, so doctor suggested to do a bed complete bed rest for at least a couple of weeks. I know you had planed lot of things for us but unfortunately

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Pathik
, I hope this latter finds you well. I'm writing this latter to inform you that due to the family emergency I won't be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the Possible spelling mistake found.CanadaCanad
canada
next
 week as my father met with an accident This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. With god's grace everything is fine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he broke his ankle, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 doctor The verb 'suggested' is used with the gerund form: "suggested doing".suggested doing
suggested to do
 a bed complete bed rest for at least a couple of weeks. I know you had planed It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 things for us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphunfortunately.unfortunately!unfortunately?unfortunately:unfortunately,unfortunately;
unfortunately

IELTS letter You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

80 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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