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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement rEW2
Dear Pathik, I hope this latter finds you well. I'm writing this latter to inform you that due to the family emergency I won't be able to come to the canada next week as my father met with an accident today. With god's grace everything is fine but he broke his ankle, so doctor suggested to do a bed complete bed rest for at least a couple of weeks. I know you had planed lot of things for us but unfortunately
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Pathik
, I hope this latter finds you well. I'm writing this latter to inform you that due to the family emergency I won't be able to
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canada
next
week as my father met with an accident
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today
. With god's grace everything is fine
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but
he broke his ankle,
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so
doctor
The verb 'suggested' is used with the gerund form: "suggested doing".
suggested to do
a bed complete bed rest for at least a couple of weeks. I know you had planed
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lot of
things for us
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but
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unfortunately
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IELTS letter You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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