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You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:

You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: QkDb
Dear Sir, I am Karan Patel living in Brooks I saw your brochure of walking tour in the mountains. I am writing this letter to let you know that I found it very interesting because I never did any walking tour in my llife and I like go to mountains too. Please can you give me some more details about this trip. First I like to know the place where we will go and how we will reach there. Second, I want to know the date and timing so that I can apply for the leave on my job. How about the accomodation and food? What kind if things we need to carry with us. Lastly, I never walk to much in my life and I will just worried about my health. what faclility you provide if anyone not finish this tour. I am awaiting for you soonest reply. Yours sinecerly, Karan Patel
Dear Sir,

I am
Karan
Patel living in Brooks I
saw
your brochure of walking tour in the mountains. I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I found it
very
interesting
because
I never did any walking tour in my
llife
and I like go to mountains too.

Please
can you give me
some
more
details
about this trip.
First
I like to know the place where we will go and how we will reach there. Second, I want to know the date and timing
so
that I can apply for the
leave
on my job. How about the
accomodation
and food? What kind if things we need to carry with us.

Lastly
, I never walk
to
much in my life and I will
just
worried about my health.
what
faclility
you provide if anyone not
finish
this tour. I am
awaiting for
you
soonest
reply.

Yours
sinecerly
,

Karan
Patel
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IELTS letter You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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