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You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:

You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: QkDb
Dear Sir, I am Karan Patel living in Brooks I saw your brochure of walking tour in the mountains. I am writing this letter to let you know that I found it very interesting because I never did any walking tour in my llife and I like go to mountains too. Please can you give me some more details about this trip. First I like to know the place where we will go and how we will reach there. Second, I want to know the date and timing so that I can apply for the leave on my job. How about the accomodation and food? What kind if things we need to carry with us. Lastly, I never walk to much in my life and I will just worried about my health. what faclility you provide if anyone not finish this tour. I am awaiting for you soonest reply. Yours sinecerly, Karan Patel
Dear Sir,

I am
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Karan
Patel living in Brooks I
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saw
your brochure of walking tour in the mountains. I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I found it
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very
interesting
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because
I never did any walking tour in my
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llife
and I like go to mountains too.

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Please
can you give me
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some
more
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details
about this trip.
First
I like to know the place where we will go and how we will reach there. Second, I want to know the date and timing
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so
that I can apply for the
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leave
on my job. How about the
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accomodation
and food? What kind if things we need to carry with us.

Lastly
, I never walk
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to
much in my life and I will
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just
worried about my health.
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what
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faclility
you provide if anyone not
The pronoun 'anyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "finishes", "finished".
finish
this tour. I am
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awaiting for
you
A determiner is probably missing here: "the soonest".
soonest
reply.

Yours
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sinecerly
,

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Karan
Patel

IELTS letter You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:

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  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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