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letter to friend asking for advice

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Dear Alex, I'm very excited to hear that you're thinking about coming to the UK and would be more than happy to answer your questions. I think you'll have a great time here, particularly if you stay in London. Its hustle and bustle are exactly what you were dreaming about when I saw you last. Plus, London offers plenty of accommodation options-you'll be spoilt for choice and definitely won't have to share a room if you don't want to. If you're still intending to specialize in business analytics, I'd really recommend applying to Imperial College London, which I graduated from. It's one of the top ten UK universities and is exceptionally strong in your field. A big advantage of Imperial is that its programs can easily be tailored to your interest. This university is highly competitive though. So, if you decide to apply, you, d better start working on your personal statement straight away and submit your application before Christmas. Don't forget about reference letters; the minimum requirement is one, but you should probably submit two. Please don't hesitate to write to me if I can help with anything at all. Warmest Wishes, Mehakdeep

Dear Alex,

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A determiner is probably missing here: "the Warmest".The Warmest
Warmest
 Wishes,

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Mehakdeep