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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a member of your college/university library and have recently received an email from them asking you to return overdue books that you had actually never borrowed. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter: • explain the situation • say what you would like them to do • ask if this problem will affect your library membership You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Librarian, Hope you are doing well. I received your email for returning the overdue books. I am writing this email in response to your email. I went through your email in detail and the list of books which you mentioned in the email was not borrowed by me. I am very much certain about it because I does not belong the program of the issued books. I request you to please go through your records and recheck for the possibilities of mismatch in the issuer information and moreover you can also contact the program coordinator of the program from which those books belong he or she might help you in tracing the books. I am little worried about my library membership. Does this situation will have the impact over my membership? because I am expecting my exams after 3 weeks and I will be in the extreme need of the library access. Please let me know if I could help you in anyway to resolve this issue. I will be pleased to contribute. Yours truly Sam
Dear Librarian,

Hope you are doing well. I received your email for returning the overdue
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. I am writing this email in response to your email.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
went through your email in detail and the list of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which you mentioned in the email was not borrowed by me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much certain about it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I
The pronoun ‘I’ must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: “do”
does
not belong the program of the issued
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
go through your records and recheck for the possibilities of mismatch in the issuer information and
moreover
you can
also
contact the program coordinator of the program from which those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
belong he or she might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you in tracing the books.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
worried about my library membership. Does this situation will have the impact over my membership?
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
because
I am expecting my exams after 3 weeks and I will be in the extreme need of the library access.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you
Did you mean “in any way”?
in anyway
to resolve this issue. I will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to contribute.

Yours
truly


Sam

IELTS letter You are a member of your college/university library and have recently received an email from them asking you to return overdue books that you had actually never borrowed. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter: • explain the situation • say what you would like them to do • ask if this problem will affect your library membership You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a member of your college/university library and have recently received an email from them asking you to return overdue books that you had actually never borrowed. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter: • explain the situation • say what you would like them to do • ask if this problem will affect your library membership You do NOT need to write any addresses.