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You are a member of the local Green Society. The secretary asked you to write the letter to the International Green Society about the environmental issues concerning your region including information about

You are a member of the local Green Society. The secretary asked you to write the letter to the International Green Society about the environmental issues concerning your region including information about Dq3qE
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to formally bring to your attention the environmental problems of my area which have made life unbearable for the people of the place. We need certain things to stay alive and healthy. We need clean air to breathe, and pure water to drink. However, the water we drink and the air we breathe in and out is heavily polluted. Soil and water pollution is caused by factory effluents, excessive use of pesticides and insecticides. Air pollution is caused by ruthless cutting down of trees, chimneys of factories, emissions from motor vehicles, burning of coal, wood and other fossil fuel, etc. Deforestation is the biggest problem in our region. There was a time when 50% of the soil, was covered with forests. But people, in their greed, have reduced it to a mere 10% now. Therefore, more attention should be paid to afforestation. It is necessary to check the unauthorized felling of trees. Transport is also among the worst polluters. The emission of smoke by vehicles is increases carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Consequently, the temperature is increasing. It disturbs the delicate environmental balance. It harms human beings in many ways. The hydrocarbons and other particles emitted by the vehicles add fuel to the fire. That's why the ‘Public Transport System’ should be made fast, frequent, comfortable and cheap. Eco-friendly devices add green fuel should be used in vehicles. Also a tremendous potential exists for increasing the population's physical activity by making environmental changes that would encourage and support the use of walking and bicycling as a mode of transportation. We need also food that is safe to eat. Unfortunately, the industrial or "conventional" way of producing food causes large-scale environmental degradation. I also want to draw your attention to the problem of obesity. Obesity has increased dramatically over the past two decades and currently about 50% of adults and 25% of children are overweight. The current epidemic of obesity is caused largely by an environment that promotes excessive food intake and discourages physical activity. Public health interventions, opportunities, and potential strategies to combat the obesity epidemic by promoting an environment that supports healthy eating and physical activity must be discussed. There should be more training facilities. For example, physical training grounds, running tracks outdoors. Finally, I want to say that we need a recycling plant in our area. There are many benefits of recycling. It conserves energy, reduces air, soil and water pollution, reduces greenhouse gases, conserves natural resourses. When we recycle, used materials are converted into new products, reducing the need to consume natural resources. In conclusion, I must say, we should think about future generations. Without cooperation at the international level, no doubt, deterioration of the environment will go on. Yours faithfully, Tori Campbell
Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to
formally
bring to your attention the
environmental
problems of my area which have made life unbearable for the
people
of the place. We
need
certain things to stay alive and healthy. We
need
clean air to breathe, and pure
water
to drink.
However
, the
water
we drink and the air we breathe in and out is
heavily
polluted.

Soil and
water
pollution
is caused
by factory effluents, excessive
use
of pesticides and insecticides.

Air pollution
is caused
by ruthless cutting down of trees, chimneys of factories, emissions from motor
vehicles
, burning of coal, wood and other fossil fuel, etc. Deforestation is the biggest problem in our region. There was a time when 50% of the soil,
was covered
with forests.
But
people
, in their greed, have
reduced
it to a mere 10%
now
.
Therefore
, more attention should
be paid
to afforestation. It is necessary to
check
the unauthorized felling of trees.

Transport is
also
among the worst polluters. The emission of smoke by
vehicles
is increases carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.
Consequently
, the temperature is increasing. It disturbs the delicate
environmental
balance. It harms human beings in
many
ways. The hydrocarbons and other particles emitted by the
vehicles
add
fuel to the fire. That's why the ‘Public Transport System’ should
be made
fast
, frequent, comfortable and
cheap
. Eco-friendly devices
add
green fuel should be
used
in
vehicles
.
Also
a tremendous potential exists for increasing the population's
physical
activity by making
environmental
changes
that would encourage and support the
use
of walking and bicycling as a mode of transportation.

We
need
also
food
that is
safe to eat. Unfortunately, the industrial or
"
conventional
"
way of producing food causes large-scale
environmental
degradation. I
also
want to draw your attention to the problem of obesity. Obesity has increased
dramatically
over the past two decades and
currently
about 50% of adults and 25% of children are overweight. The
current
epidemic of obesity
is caused
largely
by an environment that promotes excessive food intake and discourages
physical
activity. Public health interventions, opportunities, and potential strategies to combat the obesity epidemic by promoting an environment that supports healthy eating and
physical
activity
must
be discussed
. There should be more training facilities.
For example
,
physical
training grounds, running
tracks
outdoors.

Finally
, I want to say that we
need
a recycling plant in our area. There are
many
benefits of recycling. It conserves energy,
reduces
air, soil and
water
pollution,
reduces
greenhouse gases, conserves natural
resourses
. When we recycle,
used
materials
are converted
into new products, reducing the
need
to consume natural resources.

In conclusion
, I
must
say, we should
think
about future generations. Without cooperation at the international level, no doubt, deterioration of the environment will go on.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tori Campbell
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