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write a letter to your friend as she is going to vacation on this summer, recommend her a place

write a letter to your friend as she is going to vacation on this summer, recommend her a place WgDrK
Dear bella, i hope you are doing great. I heard that you got many day off from the company in summer and planning to go the vacation. I have one place to recommend it to you, its in the southern of Thailand called Krabi, its a small province that have a beautiful beaches and the sea is crystal clear. The food is also easy to find depends on what you want to eat, there are many types of food such as seafood, pizza, street food, mexcian food and Indian food. So, there is no worry about the food cuisine at all but the disadvantage of traveling to Krabi is that it doesn’t require any convenience public transportation so it might the unconvienece as you have to rent the car or a motorcycle to travel around the places which might cost a lot of money but I promise it will be worth it because since Krabi is a small province so the price of gas will be deducted and automatically saved the money for you. Sadly, i have to say that this summer Im not available to go to travel with you due to the my busy schedule that I have to work for my boss because we just accepted the big project from our old clients and the deadline is very tight compare to the limit of time we have. So, i hope you enjoy, don’t forget to send me some nice pictures and give me a call when you are free or want to share any stories while you are on the vacation. With love, Nessa
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,
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in summer and planning to go the vacation. I have one place to recommend it to you,
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in the southern of Thailand called
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Krabi
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beaches and the sea is crystal
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clear
. The
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types of
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food
such as seafood, pizza, street
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,
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food
and Indian
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, there is no worry about the
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cuisine at all
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the disadvantage of traveling to
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Krabi
is that it doesn’t require any convenience public transportation
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it might the
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unconvienece
as you
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money
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I promise it will be worth it
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since
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Krabi
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the price of gas will
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saved the money for you.
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say that this summer
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not available to go to travel with you due to
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work for my boss
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accepted
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project from our
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clients and the deadline is
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tight compare to the limit of time we have.

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,
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hope you enjoy, don’t forget to
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me
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nice pictures and give me a call when you are free or want to share any stories while you are on the vacation.

With
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,

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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend as she is going to vacation on this summer, recommend her a place

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  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
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