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book you like and influenced the most

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to request you to consider a book 'Success and failures' by Siva for your story named 'The book that influenced most'. This book details on the people who are successful in their life and, it also elaborates on the people who failed to achieve their dream, though they worked hard. These features make this an unique book. When I started reading, I felt dull and thought of skipping it. But, When i started to read about failure stories, I was astonished. Since, the storyline matches exactly with my current life. I immediately, started changing daily activities and it resulted in achieving goals. Then I realized, unsuccessful stories will also motivates us. I strongly believe this book will turn the life of all people positively. Moreover, book has plethora of images on people activities (both positivist and negative), which is an easy mean for learner's to remember. Additionally, it also has funny contents which will make us laughter and forget the stress. I appreciate for taking time to read this letter Yours faithfully Ganeshkumar

Dear Sir or Madam,

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I appreciate for taking time to read this letter

Yours faithfully


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