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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to incorrect details furnished on the article that was published on 29th June. Today when I went through an article about my town in your magazine, I realized that the content provided in them are incorrect. For the past consecutive five years, your guide is the people choice for best travellers magazine and information it carries are extremely valuable. With that being said, Majority of the community who likes to visit other countries consider your book as their bible. Due to this fact, I strongly believe you should portray correct information about the places. In the article, it has been given that the oldest architecture was built during 19th century, but we do have an model and sculptures that was constructed in 6th century. Moreover, we do have a proof in history that the construction was made during many centuries ago. This will impact the people who are passionate about historical buildings. I recommend you to kindly correct the year in your next article, so that it would be helpful for all the tourist. I believe all the fans of this magazine would be glad upon seeing the acceptance and changing the contents on realizing the wrong detail portrayal. Thanks for spending your time and please let me know if i can be of any help to you. Yours faithfully Ganesh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter
with regards to
incorrect
details
furnished on the
article
that
was published
on 29th June.

Today
when I went through an
article
about my town in your magazine, I realized that the content provided in them are incorrect. For the past consecutive five years, your guide is the
people
choice for best
travellers
magazine and information it carries are
extremely
valuable. With that
being said
,
Majority of
the community who likes to visit other countries consider your book as their bible. Due to this fact, I
strongly
believe you should portray correct information about the places.

In the
article
, it has been
given
that the oldest architecture
was built
during 19th century,
but
we do have
an
model and sculptures that
was constructed
in 6th century.
Moreover
, we do have a proof in history that the construction
was made
during
many
centuries ago. This will impact the
people
who are passionate about historical buildings.

I recommend you to kindly correct the year in your
next
article
,
so
that it would be helpful for all the tourist. I believe all the fans of this magazine would be glad upon seeing the acceptance and changing the contents on realizing the
wrong
detail portrayal.

Thanks for spending your time and
please
let
me know if
i
can be of any
help
to you.

Yours
faithfully


Ganesh
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  American English
7 paragraphs
231 words
6.0
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