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Hi Ganesh, Hope you are doing well. I'm glad that you have been selected for a course in the university, where I have completed college education. I rented an apartment near to the educational centre and later, I felt happy for choosing it. The place where I lived in was surrounded by shops, hospitals and moreover, public transport to other location was at reachable distance. Additionally, I was having seminar during late hours and living place being close by helped me in many aspects. There are quite a number of ways you can look out for accommodation. Firstly, you can check for online advertisements like market place and secondly, you can reach out to agents by getting their numbers from local newspaper commercial columns. Out of these, the apt option would be the online approach of getting the details. Also, most of the students took wrong decision on few things while choosing the place for living, and I want you to be very cautious on them. I have illustrated some of it here; don’t accept any houses for accommodation that are furnished and I would also suggest not taking basement for rent. Hope to see you soon and you can reach out to me for any help at anytime. Best regards Ganesh
Hi Ganesh,

Hope you are doing well. I'm glad that you have
been selected
for a course in the university, where I have completed college education.

I rented an apartment near to the educational
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centre
and later, I felt happy for choosing it. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
where I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in
was surrounded
by shops, hospitals and
moreover
, public transport to other location was at reachable distance.
Additionally
, I was having seminar during late hours and living
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place
being close by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me in
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many
aspects.

There are quite a number of ways you can look out for accommodation.
Firstly
, you can
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check
for online advertisements like market
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
and
secondly
, you can reach out to agents by getting their numbers from local newspaper commercial columns. Out of these, the apt option would be the online approach of getting the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.

Also
, most of the students took
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
decision on few things while choosing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
for living, and I want you to be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
cautious on them. I have illustrated
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of it here; don’t accept any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
for accommodation that
are furnished
and I would
also
suggest not taking basement for rent.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
and you can reach out to me for any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
at anytime.

Best regards

Ganesh
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