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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant JN9w
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfication about the services and food that was provided for lunch to our company. We have been meeting up at this hotel for the past 2 years and this is the 1st time we had a bad experience with you. The problem is all about uncooked food in certain dishes and the food was delayed by half an hour. This caused a huge problem among the guest and among the event managers. The meat was half cooked and some among them were raw. Some of the barrers were seen to be rude with the guest, when they asked why there was delay. We have seen your previous services and we believe that there must some situation change. I would be more grateful, if you could take an action as soon as possible on this matter and resolve it to everyone's satisfication at the earliest. Yours Faithfully, Mack
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my
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dissatisfication
about the services and food that
was provided
for lunch to our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. We have been meeting up at this hotel for the past 2 years and this is the 1st time we had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
experience with you.

The problem is all about uncooked food in certain dishes and the food
was delayed
by half an hour. This caused a huge problem among the guest and among the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
managers.

The meat was half cooked and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
among them were raw.
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
Some of the
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barrers
were
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seen
to be rude with the guest, when they asked why there was delay.

We have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
your previous
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
services and
we believe that there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
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some
situation
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change
. I would be more grateful, if you could take an action as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible on this matter and resolve it to everyone's
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satisfication
at the earliest.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Mack

IELTS letter You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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  American English
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156 words
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