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A friend is already attending a TAFE college in Australia. you will be going to Australia next year. ask him/here about what you should do before you go. ask her/him about any problems she/he has had.

A friend is already attending a TAFE college in Australia. you will be going to Australia next year. ask him/here about what you should do before you go. ask her/him about any problems she/he has had. r1xGJ
Dear Sara, How have you been? It has been too long since we were last in touch. sorry I haven’t written to you soonner. I was so busy these days. I am going to mugrate to Australia next year. I would like to get graduate degree there in computer science or more specific in mobile application development program. As I remember you have already take part in TAFE college in Australia. I would be gratefull if you can tell meabout your college and it’s department of computer science and the requirments of which I should prepare before coming to Australia like my previous university degree transcripts and its translated document. as a person who leave there more than two tears could you please let me know if you are satisty of leaving there and do you faced any special problem there that should I know? as you know experience of person who leave in a country is the most reliable report to make decision. I hope hear you soon. Best Regard. Sahar Asadian
Dear Sara,

How have you been? It has been too long since we were last in touch.
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sorry
I haven’t written to you
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soonner
. I was
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so
busy these days.

I am going to
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mugrate
to Australia
next
year.
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I
would like to
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get
graduate degree there in computer science or more specific in mobile application development program.
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As
I remember you have already
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take
part in
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TAFE
college in Australia. I would be
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gratefull
if you can
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tell
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meabout
your college and it’s department of computer science and the
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requirments
of which I should prepare
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before
coming to Australia like my previous university degree transcripts and its translated document.

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as
a person who
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leave
there more than two tears could you
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please
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let
me know if you are
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satisty
of leaving there and do you faced any special problem there that should I know?
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as
you know experience of person who
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leave
in a country is the most reliable report to
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make
decision.

I hope hear you
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soon
.

Best
Did you mean "Regards"?
Regard
.

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Sahar
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Asadian
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IELTS letter A friend is already attending a TAFE college in Australia. you will be going to Australia next year. ask him/here about what you should do before you go. ask her/him about any problems she/he has had.

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7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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