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A friend is already attending a TAFE college in Australia. you will be going to Australia next year. ask him/here about what you should do before you go. ask her/him about any problems she/he has had.

A friend is already attending a TAFE college in Australia. you will be going to Australia next year. ask him/here about what you should do before you go. ask her/him about any problems she/he has had. r1xGJ

Dear Sara, How have you been? It has been too long since we were last in touch. sorry I haven’t written to you soonner. I was so busy these days. I am going to mugrate to Australia next year. I would like to get graduate degree there in computer science or more specific in mobile application development program. As I remember you have already take part in TAFE college in Australia. I would be gratefull if you can tell meabout your college and it’s department of computer science and the requirments of which I should prepare before coming to Australia like my previous university degree transcripts and its translated document. as a person who leave there more than two tears could you please let me know if you are satisty of leaving there and do you faced any special problem there that should I know? as you know experience of person who leave in a country is the most reliable report to make decision. I hope hear you soon. Best Regard. Sahar Asadian

Dear Sara,

How have you been? It has been too long since we were last in touch. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSorry
sorry
 I haven’t written to you Possible spelling mistake found.sooner
soonner
. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 busy these days.

I am going to Possible spelling mistake found.migratemu gratemug rate
mugrate
 to Australia next
 year. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 graduate degree there in computer science or more specific in mobile application development program. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I remember you have already Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "taken".taken
take
 part in Possible spelling mistake found.TakeSafeTaleTapeCafeTaft
TAFE
 college in Australia. I would be Possible spelling mistake found.gratefulgratefullygrate fullgrateful l
gratefull
 if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
Possible spelling mistake found.me about
meabout
 your college and it’s department of computer science and the Possible spelling mistake found.requirements
requirments
 of which I should prepare This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 coming to Australia like my previous university degree transcripts and its translated document.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAs
as
 a person who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 there more than two tears could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you are Possible spelling mistake found.satisfysatiety
satisty
 of leaving there and do you faced any special problem there that should I know? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAs
as
 you know experience of person who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 in a country is the most reliable report to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 decision.

I hope hear you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best Did you mean "Regards"?Regards
Regard
.

Possible spelling mistake found.SaharaSaarSamar
Sahar
Possible spelling mistake found.Acadian
Asadian